I think part of the problem is that you didn’t post your armor page. If it’s in the link to the PDFs, I didn’t look at those. You neglected to mention the decryption key.
It looks like you’ve pretty substantially changed the interaction of armor and locations. Locations are the same “size” or equidistant, and they’re not the same costs, and I have no idea what the clumsy weight penalties are now (presumably in the armor rules). Again, it’s a lot of changes, and a little bit more complexity, and I can’t predict exactly how it will work out in play but just the fact that it increases the already pretty heavy cognitive load of Fight makes me disinclined to try it out.