I have to say, as an amateur game designer, I am totally floored by your command of Torchbearer’s systems.
We tried long and hard in this group to fashion rules for construct PCs, to accommodate some legacy Warforged and Modron characters from other settings. The way you handled this with the Servitor was downright deft.
The Death Knight and the Dhampir also have really solid “alternative” condition mechanics. Was the Death Knight inspired by the Dark Souls games, or is that just an incredible coincidence?
Anyway, my only complaint is that this release undercuts some things I was designing myself, and you did the better. There is a mix of joy and shame.
It helps that I have Thor chained to my work table.
The Servitor was the first character that I finished and was pretty easy to handle. I used an earlier design as a template (Synthetics from the USCMC supplement Luke and I wrote awhile back). The hardest part was coming up with a name!
Never played Dark Souls—more inspired by Warcraft than anything else. “Undead champion” kinda designs itself.